In room 18, we were reading the Paul Jennings book "Smart Ice cream" And we had to make our own ice cream. So here mine is.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 10, 2021
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Hi Evan. This would be a very handy icecream to have right now wouldn't it? I like that you have included three different types of icecream to cover different illnesses. Great thinking! Perhaps you could think about how you could make this advertisement more visually appealing, eg a catchy title. Mrs B
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